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xtraemotions: HD Version: http://xtraemotions.tumblr.com/post/154290202533/elizabeth-blows-animation-12

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hetake07: This was great! animation looks good. only minor tweaks with size and camera look necessary

biggest problem is the depth of field. I get ur trying to go for a pov thing, but its still too high.

2nd is the male body is a smidge too big. Elizabeth is petite, but not so much that you can cradle her head in the palm of your hand

3rd when the camera movement at the end was a nice touch. however when the camera cranes up it needs to ease out in stead of coming to a sudden stop.
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minerman67: only gripes i had are with her mouth when she first sucks, apart from that, really good! also adding a slight choke will help
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jackman: This is really good work. Just watched all of your animations and it is impressive how you have improved! I especially appreciate the little fight she puts up here, not many animators include subtle stuff like that.
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aryan826: cute