Adieu: My first try at anything SFM related. Its super rough I know, so any advice would be appreciated.

Decided to give Lightning some love since no one else wants to.

Rastafarian: The lighting could be better unless you were going for the gloomy look. The legs are of two far apart you can see its look weird the right of her pussy. Outside those minor errors looks good, but try to do more complicated pictures you don't getting better unless you try harder and different things great start though.

Adieu: @Rastafarian: I tried to add a light source but I couldn't figure out how to move it over her. And yeah, I think I could have fixed that Pussy poking out thing if I tried. Thanks Rasta. Do you know of any good SFM porn tutorials?

Rastafarian: @Adieu: http://www.naughtymachinima.com/user/kp0988/videos/public

Froggy: This, too, should be usefull when talking about lightning and camera placement :

https://officialdigitalero.com/phpbb/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=2325

Froggy: (You'll need an account on this site to see it, sadly. I don't think you can find it anywhere else.)