Anonymous¹: Advice. Text should never cover the action, especially when the sequences are so short and your text overlays 90% of the sequence. Second, the text in this is uninteresting and adds nothing to the actual movie. It's not erotic, it's not entertaining, it's not cute. Just get rid of it.

GetGRAYED: The animation itself isn't bad, but the text destroyed it. Better to do breakway cuts with a smooth transition after the action for more exposition, if necessary.

speedlot: Yeah the text totally makes this completely unusable for me.

aryan826: this is mirrors edge music no?

Anonymous²: @aryan826: No its actually ingame music, i believe its one of the nightclubs

Rikther: The obvious, hopefully, has been said already. The animation is nice and the sound is pretty good!

MassErectFan: "quality images & animations"........ hahahahahaha

Did not neeed 2 read all that...... sound effects r anoying af. ruined my miri..... fuk u.