xtraemotions: new comer here, feedback is appreciated

ricoaio: Personally I dont like thet "mouth fingering", but you have potential

Fapinator: It looks like you don't have any AO. Also, while you animated some facial expressions, they lack the subtly of real human faces. Most notable are the eyes. They don't blink and are fixated on 1 point. People's eyes constantly are looking at different things, darting from one focal point to the next. Even if it is a single object of focus, the eye darts all over that object to bring into focus specific details. All of that and the lack of variety of looping and you end up looking at a 3d animation of 2 bodies instead of seeing 2 characters who happen to be 3d and animated.

bloczek: light in background. It's very ugly- not even a single shadow.