Icekatana: This looks like it was written by a 4th grader.

ComixZone420: Ahah, that's true)) I worked with a translator)

Icekatana: Yeah, those are not the best. Proofreading is important, but if you don't speak English natively, then that's difficult. I do like the concept of this though.

ComixZone420: That's the problem) I speak pretty bad English myself. Unfortunately there are no people for proofreading) Maybe I'll find an enthusiast for my future work) In any case I knew it would be a problem)