dicks: This is not how dogs work. I imagine this is what it looks like when someone has never seen a dog tries to animate a bestiality scene. Good for a laugh though, I guess.
LordAardvark: Glad I'm not the only one who thought the pose was off.
I think the biggest issue is that the reference material I used was a far smaller dog than the wolf used here.
I made comments about it on the stream, about the base feeling way too small (how the hell would the wolf be able to stand like that?), but no one made any comments about it.
It was good practice, at least. If nothing else, I learned the Skyrim Wolf poses MUCH better than the DAO mutt (the dog I used in Girl's Best Friend).
I will need to take into consideration his size next time, though. Different sizes mean different ways of mounting.
LordAardvark: I also really need to work on the thrusting.
I think my biggest issue is I focus too much on showing off the full length of the shaft. Dogs don't generally do that, but instead do very small, fast thrusts.
Slow, long thrusts is a predominantly human thing. Most animals don't do that.
If there is any other feedback you guys and gals would like to provide, I'd very much like to hear it! I'm still very new to this particular genre of animating, as you all can tell. I'll take as many critiques as I can get.
Anonymous3: Okay. My opinion: I do not like sharp, quick jerks.
I like smooth movements(They certainly can be done quickly, but at the same time should be smooth).
This applies not only animation dogs, but also horses.
And other. Check animators such as Noname55 and SFMoneyshot.
Next. This applies animation generally.
Dick must be bent a little before entering the woman.
Leeterr demonstrated this in his animations.
Check them out.
I summarized, but you get the gist.
P.S. Make has finally animation not only with dogs!
Good luck to you.
Anonymous4: @LordAardvark: Other than the frightening pose, the major issue is, as you noted, the long, slow thrusts. Not how it works for dogs. Then again, this is all imaginary, so whatever. Definitely the major issue is the dog's pose defying all known physics. Few tweaks, and this could be gold. More beast!
LordAardvark: @Anonymous: Yeah, it's all duly noted. In the future, I should try to stick to reference material that uses creatures of comparable size to what I am using.
The picture I used as reference for this used a dog about half the size... It made sense for him.
Pahealer: Good on you for using this as a chance to learn and improve. I can think of a few animators that would have thrown down the wall of "ITS MY ART!! STOP TROLLING" at the first hint of critique.
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I think the biggest issue is that the reference material I used was a far smaller dog than the wolf used here.
I made comments about it on the stream, about the base feeling way too small (how the hell would the wolf be able to stand like that?), but no one made any comments about it.
It was good practice, at least. If nothing else, I learned the Skyrim Wolf poses MUCH better than the DAO mutt (the dog I used in Girl's Best Friend).
I will need to take into consideration his size next time, though. Different sizes mean different ways of mounting.
Thanks for all the feedback, everyone!
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I think my biggest issue is I focus too much on showing off the full length of the shaft. Dogs don't generally do that, but instead do very small, fast thrusts.
Slow, long thrusts is a predominantly human thing. Most animals don't do that.
If there is any other feedback you guys and gals would like to provide, I'd very much like to hear it! I'm still very new to this particular genre of animating, as you all can tell. I'll take as many critiques as I can get.
I like smooth movements(They certainly can be done quickly, but at the same time should be smooth).
This applies not only animation dogs, but also horses.
And other. Check animators such as Noname55 and SFMoneyshot.
Next. This applies animation generally.
Dick must be bent a little before entering the woman.
Leeterr demonstrated this in his animations.
Check them out.
I summarized, but you get the gist.
P.S. Make has finally animation not only with dogs!
Good luck to you.
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The picture I used as reference for this used a dog about half the size... It made sense for him.
Less so for Wulf here.