Waagh: Is this your first work ever? Pretty damn impressive! I love the addition of a creampie at the end. :D
My only gripe is probably the a bit repetitive angles over the course of 2 minutes. Also a full body shot at both of them would have been kinda cool at the end, but alas.
In any case, great work! If you have a tumblr or something, definitely pass the link. :)
Punished_Venom_SFM: @Avallach: I have but it's completely empty :D I'm just testing around right now before releasing things over there here. thank you for your feedback :)
servantesnc: Its fairly good, sounds needs a little more balancing, for one it should not all be one level of audio, like when it starts pulling away it should be slightly quieter in sounds, and when it gets closer slightly louder, also her breathing should be a tad lower in volume .
a few more slap sounds would break up the repeating sounds and a bit lower in volume as they were peaking audio just a bit.
lastly while its great to have a nice long scene, it goes on for just a little too long, could easily lose 30 seconds.
Overall not bad at all, really all the things I said are small tweaks so take them as you will, except the length which is purely preferential.
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My only gripe is probably the a bit repetitive angles over the course of 2 minutes. Also a full body shot at both of them would have been kinda cool at the end, but alas.
In any case, great work! If you have a tumblr or something, definitely pass the link. :)
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a few more slap sounds would break up the repeating sounds and a bit lower in volume as they were peaking audio just a bit.
lastly while its great to have a nice long scene, it goes on for just a little too long, could easily lose 30 seconds.
Overall not bad at all, really all the things I said are small tweaks so take them as you will, except the length which is purely preferential.