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Singularity4061: So this is my first animation ever made. Any constructive criticism is much appreciated.
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bop811: Awesome!!! Dont U lie!! :)

I think of the meaning of word, 'first' once again.
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Sago: @Singularity4061: if this is your first, this is a really, really good start. the sound is an excellent touch. hope you keep it up!
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majestic_117: ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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Anonymous1: wow, im speechless, love the detail, pilot is a great touch
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xalagarf: Nice job, can't believe this is a first animation. Lol @ the pilot.
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abikka12: your first? dam good
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Vainer: This is Pequod! We cumming shortly at LZ! So stand by!
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Anonymous2: Great job!
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brshard: I think its canon at this point. Quiet loves being on top.
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tikwid: Really good for a first animation. My only criticism would be that I can see pretty clearly where all of the pivot points are, which sort of makes the characters look stiff and robotic. Also, maybe her head shouldn't move with the rest of her body as much. It sort of makes her look like a wooden seesaw, if you know what I mean. Continuing with the overall theme of stiffness, her boobs could be a little softer and more jiggly. That might be more of the fault of the model, though. All minor nitpicks, however. Overall, I love it.
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Anonymous3: Peqoud looking back is hilarious