chillthebone: The movement's a little bit too violent/disconnected. Focus more on slower scenes and try and flesh out proper human locomotion. At this point it's hard to enjoy the content with all the visual noise.
chillthebone: @Webmoin: It's not about it being rough or not, its about proper key framing throughout the scene. There's ways to cut corners correctly and incorrectly. It's a good animation alright but there's room for improvement. Fleshing out the movement and making sure there's good quality full range of motion animation is important. You wouldn't want people to force suspension of disbelief onto people. The hair is probably just a static mesh with very few interactions. Just unfortunately not a well rigged skeleton overall.
Webmoin: @chillthebone: I'm not sure if you mean like she's hanging in the air but in this case she's being fucked so hard that it would be normal for a little Elin to actually be bumping.
Unlike the next animation from another artist her back is floating in the air without support.
Anyway, it probably always can be improved that's why I think it's a shame that when people say that it has been done that I'm not saying it but thinking that it could be done with much better movement.
Anonymous1: @Webmoin: chillthebone is correct though. The animation still has more room for improvement. What you're doing is trying to discredit the valid critique. It's not rough, it's crude. The main problem is not whether the hair is animated or not, it's her entire back torso in relation to her hips being lifted in the air. They move at almost the same time making he look like a static doll instead of flexible Elin.
Plus, the Man's shoulder move in in such in unbelievable way because it disconnects from the clavicle, especially with how his head is jerking back and forth which makes it look like she's headbutting the wooden Elin. He's probably the primary reason why the Elin is "bumping". It's not normal.
It may have been rendered out nicely, but any professional animator can point the fact that the animator is still pretty amateurish. Brushing off any sense of criticism doesn't help the artist in any way.
It may look pretty enough for horny teenagers, but that doesn't protect it from scrutiny.
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It's very nice, 3Dandy!
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Unlike the next animation from another artist her back is floating in the air without support.
Anyway, it probably always can be improved that's why I think it's a shame that when people say that it has been done that I'm not saying it but thinking that it could be done with much better movement.
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Plus, the Man's shoulder move in in such in unbelievable way because it disconnects from the clavicle, especially with how his head is jerking back and forth which makes it look like she's headbutting the wooden Elin. He's probably the primary reason why the Elin is "bumping". It's not normal.
It may have been rendered out nicely, but any professional animator can point the fact that the animator is still pretty amateurish. Brushing off any sense of criticism doesn't help the artist in any way.
It may look pretty enough for horny teenagers, but that doesn't protect it from scrutiny.